I think it might look a little less like he's kicking if his hands were offset a frame or two. I think both his arms and his legs hit their extremes on the same frame, which doesn't usually happen IRL.
It also looks like the forward knees are the same drawing? It's giving a bit of a weird strobing effect, like the leg is going half a cycle, and then coming right back up rather than kicking his foot out behind him.
If that makes any sense?
I love that you're doing a cool perspective run cycle though. That's awesome.
Your drawing is super awesome! He looks a little bit like he's kicking rather than running and his head drops a little too much forward. It's also kinda strange that he opens his hand when he swings them backwards. Other than all that this looks great!
Thanks man. Yea, the whole hand open/close thing was kind of a mess when I realized it. I decided to leave it there because I liked the overlap of the open hand, but it would've probably been difficult to redraw the open hand instead of the fist forward.
It also looks like the forward knees are the same drawing? It's giving a bit of a weird strobing effect, like the leg is going half a cycle, and then coming right back up rather than kicking his foot out behind him.
If that makes any sense?
I love that you're doing a cool perspective run cycle though. That's awesome.